【全职二校】超品兵王在都市

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原文内容

王凡垂头丧气的从人才市场走出,心里有些郁闷。他没有想到,自己堂堂超级兵王,令国内外无数地下势力闻风丧胆的存在,竟然有一天会败在狗日的学历上。电话铃声响起,王凡看了下提示,马上接了起来。

“王凡,我们还是分手吧。这么多年你一直不在我身边,我需要的是一个男朋友,不是一个手机宠物。”

他试图想要挽回,“我已经回国了,以后都会在你身边。”

“可你能给我什么呢?你在国外待了这么多年,别人在餐馆洗盘子的都发财了!你呢?这么多年你有存款吗?回国后这么久你找到一份安稳的工作了吗?你养得起我吗?”

“我能!我一定会买最大的房子……”王凡认真地说着。

女友冷冷打断了他的话,“你会怎么样?会给我宝马车?会给我路易威登的包?菲拉格慕的鞋子?香奈儿的套装?你连一套一百平的房子都给不了我!我累了,不想再跟你纠缠下去了。王凡,我走了。”

电话被挂断,王凡握紧了手机。

“啊!抢包了,快帮我抓住他!”一声尖叫惊醒了他的思绪。

只见一名穿着OL制服的美女,正一边尖叫,一边踩着黑色的水晶高跟鞋奋力奔跑。

在她的前方,一名墨镜摩托男手里拽了个lv包,正在努力加速逃离。

“让开,都给老子让开!”青年一边加速,一边大吼,一副谁敢拦就直接撞上去的架势。

突如其来的一幕惊呆了巷子内的人,短暂的呆滞之后,大部分人都靠到巷子边上,没有人敢拦路,更没有人敢说话。

这年头敢抢劫的都是一些不要命的,谁都不想无缘无故挨上两刀。

制服美女看着这一幕,眼神中闪烁出一抹绝望。

就在青年摩托车掠过王凡身边的那一刹那,王凡猛然抬腿,直接一脚就踹上了车尾。

青年根本就没有想到还有人敢多事,轰地一声摩托车被踹中,摩托车疯狂的旋转起来,青年整个人被甩飞出去,四仰八叉的倒在了地上,抢来的包也掉在了地上。

“啊!”周围的人看到这一幕,忍不住捂住嘴巴发出尖叫。

王凡没有理会那些尖叫,走到青年身边,拿起黑色单肩包递给ol美女“你的包。”

“谢谢谢谢。”美女也从呆滞中回过神,一边拍着胸脯喘粗气,一边道谢。

王凡看着女子长相,忍不住停了半秒钟,赶紧收回视线。

“不客气,这是我应该做的。”说罢,王凡扭头就走。

“等等。”美女情急之下,一把拉住了王凡,“我叫戴玉莹,你叫什么名字?谢谢你今天救了我,要不我中午请你吃个饭吧。”戴玉莹一边说话,一边仔细打量起了王凡。

二十五六岁的年纪,一米八左右的身高,面部轮廓棱角分明,虽然谈不上多帅气,但却绝对不难看,给人一种很阳刚的感觉,很有男人味。

“举手之劳,吃饭就不必了,我还有事就先走了,再见。”王凡摆手拒绝。

戴玉莹有些傻眼,她没有想到,王凡竟然拒绝了她,还拒绝的这么干脆。

要知道,她戴玉莹可是一位不折不扣的美女呀,平日想请她吃饭的人多了去了,她都不屑一顾。可今天,王凡却毫不犹豫的拒绝了她,这令她有些郁闷的同时也很是受伤,难道自己的魅力下降了?或者说,世界上真有王凡这种做好事不留名的人?

只是,王凡还没有离开,便再次被人拦住了。

“你给老子站住!”只见那名抢包青年站了起来,不知从哪里掏出一把水果刀,恶狠狠的走向了王凡。

他先前摔的不轻,但没有受到什么严重的伤。他恶狠狠的盯着王凡,眼神充血,宛若一头野兽。

本来今天这一单就要得手了,可这不知道从哪里奔出来的王八蛋,竟然坏了自己的好事。要是不给他点颜色看看,他都不知道马王爷有几只眼。

“你叫我?”王凡看向青年,皱起了眉头。要不是先前那一脚他手下留情,青年摔下去哪怕是不死,也会掉半条命。可谁知,这家伙竟然死性不改,还敢找自己的麻烦。

“你要干什么?你不要过来,否则我可要报警了。”戴玉莹则是飞快拦在了王凡前面,一边掏手机一边叫道。

“报警?报尼玛,老子先捅了你再捅他!”青年不仅没有被戴玉莹吓到,反而加快速度冲了过来。那手里的水果刀在阳光的反衬下刺眼夺目,令人害怕。

戴玉莹有些不知所错,脸色唰的变得惨白,娇躯乱颤。她一个普通的都市丽人,哪儿遇到过这种事儿?

王凡的脸色阴沉的可怕,他没有想到,这家伙竟然如此的无法无天,光天化日之下抢劫就算了,还敢拿刀子捅人,看来先前的教训还是不够。

青年很快就已经冲到戴玉莹身边,抓着手里的水果刀恶狠狠的捅下,辣手摧花,没有半点怜香惜玉。

只见王凡一只手伸出,一把便抓住了青年持刀的手腕,紧接着另外一只手就变成巴掌拍了过去。

啪地一声,青年被打的七荤八素,几颗牙齿夹杂在鲜血中喷吐出去。

王凡不解恨,反手又是一巴掌,青年的整张脸都变成了猪头。

“今天算你走运,下次我再见到你做这些事情,直接废了你!滚!”王凡盯着青年冷冷说道。

王凡教训了青年一顿,感觉心里的郁闷散去不少,好受多了。他正打算拍拍屁股离开,忽然看到旁边的戴玉莹软倒了下去。

王凡手疾眼快,赶紧一把抱住戴玉莹,这才避免她倒地。“你没事儿吧?”王凡有些心跳加速,如此丽人,对任何人来说都是一种诱惑。

“我,我脚扭了。”戴玉莹弱弱的说道,显得很是尴尬。被王凡抱着,她那俏脸更是潮红。

译文内容

Wang Fan felt sad and dejected as he walked out of the Human Resources office. He found it so difficult to accept the result. From where he came from, he was feared by all the gangs. They even called him "Mighty Soldier King". Here in the city, he couldn’t even find a decent job because he lacked a college degree. Suddenly, his phone rang. Wang Fan picked it up immediately when he saw the caller ID.

"Wang Fan," said the voice from the other line. It was his girlfriend. "It’s over. I’m breaking up with you. You’ve been gone for so long. I need a boyfriend, not a phone pal."

"Darling, please—" Wang Fan started, "I know I’ve been gone, but I’m back now. I’ll always be with you now."

"Oh yeah? Well, what can you give me? A dishwasher working abroad earns so much money than you. What exactly can you give me, huh?" She challenged. "Do you even have savings after working all these years? Have you found a single stable job since you got back? Will you be able to give me the things I want?"

"I can, I promise! I’ll buy you the biggest house you want! And ...” Wang Fan said seriously.

"And what?" the girl interrupted. "How are things going to get better, Wang Fan? Will you ever get to buy me a BMW car? Will you ever get to buy me a Louis Vuitton handbag? Ferragamo's shoes? Gifts from Chanel? Ha! You can’t even afford to buy me a hundred square meter house, for Christ’s sake. Wang Fan. I’m tired. I can’t deal with this anymore. Goodbye, Wang Fan," she said as she hung up.

Wang Fan held his handphone tightly, dumbfounded.

"AHHHH! Help! Somebody, help! Thief, thief! That thief stole my bag!"

Wang Fan heard someone scream from the other end of the street. A lady in uniform was screaming in panic and desperation, running as fast as her high-heeled shoes would take her.

A man with dark sunglasses holding a Louis Vuitton handbag was fleeing from the scene towards a motorcycle.

"Go away! Right now!" He said to the onlookers as he jumped onto his vehicle. As soon as he did, he turned the handles and accelerated.

In shock, every person on the sidewalk squeezed themselves up to the wall as the motorcycle zoomed past them. Nobody dared block its way or say anything to help the lady.

It’s risky to be involved in robberies nowadays. Nobody wants to get hurt.

The lady in a suit watched the motorcycle drive away, helplessly.

As the motorcycle approached, Wang Fan pulled his left leg back, and with all his might, flung it into the raging vehicle in a strong forceful kick as soon as it passed in front of him.

The kick took the man by surprise. He couldn’t believe what happened! His motorcycle tumbled sharply and it went spinning on the pavement. The impact threw him to the further end of the road and forced him to drop the stolen bag to the ground.

"Ahhhhh!" The pedestrians held their hands to their mouths as they screamed.

Wang Fan, indifferent to the commotion, walked to the side of the man, calmly picked up the bag, and handed it to the lady. "Here’s your bag, ma’am."

"Th-thank you." The lady managed to say when she realized that he was talking to her. She was still in stunned from the events that just happened.

Wang Fan inspected the lady for half a second before diverting his gaze.

"Not at all, it’s my pleasure." Wang Fan turned to leave.

"Wait a second!" Wang Fan felt a hand grasp his arm from behind. "I’m Dai Yuying. What’s your name? I… just want to thank you for your help," she continued. "Can we have lunch together?” She looked at him as she awaited his response.

Wang Fan was at his mid-20’s, standing 180 cm tall. His face has well-defined angles on his forehead, cheeks, and jawline. He was not the type you would notice in a crowd, but he was not bad-looking either.

"You’re welcome, really. It’s no trouble at all. You don’t need to take me out for dinner. Thanks for the offer, though. I have to go." Dai Yuying pulled his hand away gently as he refused her invitation.

Dai Yuying stood perplexed at his immediate refusal.

For most people, Dai Yuying was a sight to behold. She had light skin and brown hair that emphasized her bright almond eyes. She had men falling at her feet and any of them would have accepted her lunch invite in a heartbeat. But Wang Fan just refused her without hesitation. ‘Have I lost my charm?’ she thought sadly. ‘He didn’t even tell me his name,’ she realized.

Wang Fan was about to walk away when he heard a voice from behind him.

"Stop!" It was the man from the motorcycle! He pushed himself up and turned to Wang Fan, holding a sharp, silver blade.

He didn’t have serious injuries despite his fall. Like a rabid beast, he shot Wang Fan a deadly stare.

‘This should have been an easy robbery if he didn’t get in the way,’ the man thought. ‘It's time to give him a lesson.’

"Are you talking to me?" Wang Fan turned to the man, unafraid. Wang Fan hesitated because the man was badly injured. He stood in disbelief at the challenge thrown at him.

"STOP!" Dai Yuying cried. "STOP OR I’LL CALL THE POLICE!" Dai Yuying rushed in front of Wang Fan, holding up her phone.

"Call the police?" The motorcycle driver asked manically. "Fuck the police! You’ll both be dead by the time they get here!" The man started running towards Dai Yuying. The sun shining brightly against his knife. The people in the street stood frozen in the background.

Dai Yuying turned pale. She trembled. She didn’t know what to do! Growing up comfortably in the city, she thought these things could only happen in the movies!

Wang Fan gasped. ‘What the hell? This man must be crazy if he could stab someone in broad daylight! It seems he hasn’t learned his lesson!’

Before Wang Fan could do anything to stop him, the man’s knife dug into Dai Yuying’s stomach as he stabbed her fiercely, without mercy.

On reflex, Wang Fan managed to grab the attacker’s weapon hand and slap him with his free hand.

The man failed to dodge, getting his face bloody and teeth knocked out.

In his rage, Wang Fan charged and started to throw the man punch after punch until his face was red and swollen all over.

"You’re lucky this time. The next time you cause trouble again, I swear I’ll kill you. Go!" Wang Fan said, dismissing the young man.

Wang Fan felt good about the skirmish. It was a much-needed release of all the tension he felt for the day. As he was about to leave, he saw Dai Yuying falling down from behind him.

Wang Fan quickly turned to keep her from falling. "Are you OK?" Wang Fan asked as he held her. He felt his heart beat faster when he felt her skin against his. Her beauty was tempting.

"My foot is sprained." Dai Yuying replied, feeling embarrassed. Her face turned hot as he felt his touch.