【全职质检】-网文:新婚夜,残疾大佬站起来了(停用)

类型:现代言情

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术语表:
唐恋(女主):Jane
秦世鸣(男二):Thomas
白薇(女二):Alice
唐北山(女主父亲):Lance

原文内容

婚礼现场,新娘唐恋惊慌地拉住转身要走的新郎秦世鸣,眼里满是恳求。

神父刚问完新郎是否愿娶新娘,可他不仅无视神父接起了电话,还突然要走。

“白薇知道我们结婚,抑郁症发作要跳楼,我必须救她。”

秦世鸣不耐烦,一把把唐恋推坐在地。

唐恋崴了脚,狼狈地伸出手,想留下他。

“今天是我们的婚礼!白薇背叛过你,你还放不下要找她吗!”

秦世鸣躲开她的手,眼神愈加冷漠,“轮不到你来说她,她就算做错伤害了我,你也不如她。”

唐恋心口一疼。她就知道她永远都没白薇重要。

“求你了,交换完戒指你再走也行啊!”

秦世鸣一脸嫌恶,“人命你不担心,只担心你的婚礼,冷血。婚礼取消,下次再办。”

秦世鸣边走边扔掉胸口的礼花,全然不顾周围异样的眼神。

新郎走了,全场哗然。

唐恋坐在地上止不住发抖流泪。

唐北山走过来瞪着眼睛骂道:“连个男人都管不住,我怎么会生出你这样的女儿!”

他气得不轻,又骂了几句,拉着妻子头也不回地离开。

唐恋的家人都走了,只留下她一个新娘子,连个撑腰的人都没有。

男方那边原本还心虚,见状反倒挺直了腰板。

“新郎跑了父母都不管,我看这新娘就有问题。”

“她是不是给新郎戴了绿帽?”

周围宾客的指点声越来越大,唐恋像个小丑顶着脏水和嘲笑。


译文内容

At the wedding, [唐恋] pulled [秦世鸣] who was about to leave in a panic, with pleading eyes.

The priest had just asked the groom if he was willing to marry the bride, but he not only ignored the priest answering the phone, but also sudenly wanted to go.

"[白薇] knows that we are going to get married and she is going to jump off a building because of depression. I have to save her."

[秦世鸣] pushed a bunch of Tang Love to the ground impatiently.

[唐恋] sprain her ankle, stretched out her hand awkwardly, trying to keep him.

"Today is our wedding. [白薇] betrayed you before. Can't you let her go and look for her?"

[秦世鸣] dodged her hand, eyes became colder and colder, "It's not your turn to say to her. Even if she did it wrong by hurting me, you are not as good as her."

[唐恋] had heartache. She knew that she was never more important than [白薇].

"Please, you can leave after changing the ring!"

[秦世鸣] had a face of disgust, "You don't worry about your life, but only your wedding. Cold blood. Cancel the wedding. I'll hold it next time."

[秦世鸣] threw away the fireworks on his chest while walking, completely ignoring the strange eyes around him.

The bridegroom left, the crowd started an uproar.

[唐恋] couldn't help trembling and tearing.

[唐北山] came over, stare at her and scold, "you can't even control a man. How can I give birth to a daughter like you?"

After cursing for a while, he left with his wife.

All of her family left, leaving her alone at the scene. There was no one to support her back.

The man was originally guilty, but when he saw this, he straightened his back.

"The bridegroom has run away, and his parents don't care. I think there is something wrong with the bride."

"Did she put a green hat on the groom?"

The guests around were giving her more and more guidance. Like a clown, [唐恋] headed dirty water and laughed at.