【兼职英语质检】-网文：离婚后，她马甲遍全球
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原文内容
华灯夜上，码头上的一女子格外引人瞩目。一袭宝石红丝绸长裙泛着漂亮光泽，勾勒出女人玲珑有致的曲线，收腰设计也恰到好处衬出她修长的双腿。干净简洁却又蛊惑人心。秦诗澜都看呆了：“你这三年穿得跟尼姑似的清心寡欲，真是暴殄天物。”沈思宁过去最喜欢的就是宝石红，却被前夫孟司晨冷着脸说倒尽胃口。于是沈思宁便按照要求模仿他的白月光，从头到脚也都是素雅的白。 甚至按照他和公婆的要求做家庭煮妇。此时，沈思宁和秦诗澜也来到了游轮上，随后便轻车熟路去三层参加晚宴。“宝贝好好享受，那八个男公关绝对干净身材好。不着急，晚宴还有一个小时才开始，”秦诗澜笑眯眯道，“长夜漫漫，可别浪费。”沈思宁无奈地笑了笑。沈思宁今晚没什么搞男人的兴趣，所以就去吹着海风看夜景。结果不长眼的人偏要凑上来。“美女真骚啊，在这里喝酒是不是寂寞难耐了？”沈思宁抬头就看见矮个男正猥琐地朝她吹口哨，甚至把手伸过来。“要是寂寞，可以找哥排解啊。反正哥有的是钱… …哎哟我的手！”“咔嚓”一声。 沈思宁轻而易举掰断了他的手腕。她甚至懒得给这样的丑人施舍眼神。“现在滚还来得及。”矮个男惨叫着收回手。“草！你他妈给脸不要脸是不是？等死吧！”
译文内容
As night fell, a woman at the dock caught everyone's attention.She wore a stunning gem-red silk gown that shimmered beautifully, accentuating her graceful curves. The fitted waist perfectly highlighted her long, elegant legs.Elegant and understated, yet captivating.Betty was stunned. "You've been dressing like a nun for the past three years. It's such a shame to hide your beauty."Laura used to love red gem, but her ex Mark's cold remarks about her style made her change.So, Laura dressed in simple whites to imitate his white moon light, just like he and his parents preferred, becoming the perfect house cook.Just then, Laura and Batty made their way to the third floor on the boat for the banquet."Enjoy yourself, darling. Those eight male PRs are clean and fit. No rush. The banquet starts in an hour," Betty said with a mischievous smile.Laura put on a resigned smile.Not in the mood for hunting, Laura went to enjoy the sea breeze and night view.But some people just couldn't take a hint."Hey there, gorgeous. Drinking alone? Feeling lonely?"A short man whistled at her lewdly and even reached out her hand."If you're lonely, I can keep you company. I've got plenty of money... Ow, my hand!"With a swift motion, Alice effortlessly twisted his wrist. She didn't even bother to spare him a glance."Leave now while you still can."The short man screamed and pulled back his hand."You ungrateful... You're in big trouble!"