类型:现代言情
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原文内容
江母满目厌恶瞪着江挽辞,怀里搂着和她七八分相似的江家真千金,江希月。江希月双眼通红求情,“妈妈你误会了,姐姐肯定不是故意推我下楼!”一个月前,江父车祸需要献血,却意外发现江挽辞不是江家千金。江家夫妇发动人脉找回江希月后,江挽辞这假千金没有一天好日子过。江希月一次次栽赃陷害她,江家夫妇始终维护亲生女儿,PUA她抢走江希月的人生。这段日子,江挽辞彻底看清三人嘴脸。江挽辞眸光落到江希月膝盖可有可无的瘀青上。“我若杀你应该直接让你跳楼,死无对证。”极凉语调让气氛如坠冰窖。江希月仿佛受到巨大冲击,表情脆弱,眼中得意却掩藏不住。江母怒骂,“养不熟的白眼狼!丧心病狂!报警!”江挽辞从容不迫,掀起嘴角,“反正经不起查的人不是我。”但江父突然出手:“她也喊了我们20年爸妈,不用赶尽杀绝。”江希月松了口气,得意看向江挽辞,看她还能翻出什么浪花。江父拿出几张钞票,一副施舍姿态,“拿着这点路费自己回去吧,以后你和江家再没半点关系。”江挽辞眸底闪过嘲讽。“这钱,留着给你们治脑子和眼睛用,但我走之前必须要把今天的账算清楚!江希月,你自己说你到底是怎么‘滚下’楼梯的?”
译文内容
Valerie glared at Kate with disdain, holding the real heiress of the Warren family, Laura, who bore a 70 or 80 percent resemblance to her.Laura's eyes were red as she pleaded, "Mom, you've misunderstood. Kate couldn't have pushed me down the stairs on purpose!"A month ago, when Roger had a car accident and needed a blood transfusion, they unexpectedly found that Kate wasn't the Warren family's child.Since the Warren couple used their connections and eventually found Laura, Kate, the false heiress, hadn't had a single good day.Laura repeatedly framed her, and the Warren couple always sided with their biological daughter, emotionally manipulated her to feel indebted for the life she lived.During this period, Kate saw through their true colors.Kate's gaze fell on the insignificant bruise on Laura's knee."If I really wanted to kill you, I should have pushed you off the roof, since the dead can’t give witness."Her icy tone chilled the atmosphere.Laura was hit greatly and looked weak, though her eyes couldn't hide her glee.Valeria angrily cursed. "Ungrateful white-eye wolf! Insane! Call 110!"Showing a mocking smile, Kate replied calmly, "After all, it's not me who can't withstand the investigation."But Roger suddenly intervened. "After all, she called us ‘Mom and Dad’ for 20 years. There's no need to terminate her."Laura breathed a sigh of relief and cast a triumphant glance at Kate, waiting to see what waves she could create.Roger pulled out a few bills with an air of charity. "Take this for travel expenses and go back by yourselves. From now on, you have nothing to do with the Warren family."Kate's eyes shone with sarcasm."Keep the money for your introspection and vision correction, but before I leave, we must pay off the debt once and for all! Laura, why don't you tell us how exactly you 'roll' down the stairs?"